i guess the problem is the sun color and sun dir, i think they're the culprits edit them and check

Im kinda new to WAW moding, so how do i place this custom PAP cameo in to my map?

Hey you should change the Font to Black ops 2's font (it's Agency FB) or use the AW one , you should also try to incorporate a  hud like the modern games , and for the feels of the map plz return the ambient damned music and add beeping sounds when your next to machines i have a lot of ideas if...